May 29th, 2004

Postbox Fairy

New York Love

This is the story I started writing in March.

I may regret this in the morning, given I've written fair chunks of it just now and therefore not given myself the opportunity to re-read and revise them with a fresh eye, but I'm at least happy with the shape and general content now, and I could tinker forever.

Many thanks to borusa for excellent beta-ing; and to vectorious, andrewwyld and rosie_rhi_bee who also read the first draft & offered helpful comments. I've retained some bits they suggested I change, and also changed various bits they thought were fine (and I will not be surprised to receive comments along the lines of "I liked it better before"). Some scenes are untouched, others (including the first) heavily rewritten. I could point out a dozen or so things I'm still not happy with, but it's never going to be perfect, and I'm doing this for my own enjoyment, and there comes a point where I just go "that's enough".

Notwithstanding the above, please feel free to offer constructive criticism, as I may well do a final pass before posting it to my website and fanfiction.net.

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